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1984 George Orwell Analysis

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1. One of the reasons I received the score of a five was that I did not directly address the question. In my introduction, I wrote, “In this book, Orwell also discussed the topic of governmental control and loss of passion in relationships through Winston’s affair with Julia, sexual oppression, and the disestablishment of the family,” as my thesis. However, I did not directly address a question that Orwell asks and answers throughout the book. Another reason I received a 5 was that I did not connect my thesis throughout the essay. I attempted too, but was discovering my opinion as I wrote. Due to this, I did not stay perfectly consistent. My closing sentence was, “Humans are social creatures, and Big Brother’s isolating culture is, at its core, …show more content…

My analysis was well thought out and complex. I was able to write deeply about the relationships and life portrayed in 1984. I did this by empathizing with the characters and connecting patters I saw in Winston’s recollection of relationship throughout the book. At first, I thought Winston was only using Julia as a form of rebellion against the party. However, as I wrote my essay, I began to realize how shallow Winston’s relationships were. I thought that a world like 1984 would be a terribly lonely one to live in, and perhaps his relationship with Julia was more a grasp for connection than outright rebellion. I was able to summarize this in my final paragraph. I wrote, “The world of 1984 is a terribly lonely one. The destabilization of the family, constant observation of friendships and conversation, and control of sex, human’s most base bonding experience, results in a socially inept and solidary population. Any emotional connection besides one’s dedication to Big Brother is terminated.” 3. As you wrote on my essay review, I did not specifically write to the prompt and received a five. To increase my score I need to make sure I am following exactly the questions asked, and respond to them accordingly. My essay was also not as well thought out as it could have been. I discovered my ideas as I wrote. Because of this, my ideas are not as well connected or as deep as they could have been. In the next essays we write, I will try to prepare my ideas ahead of

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