Dear Mr. Mc. Bride, When you wrote “Hip Hop Planet” I understand that the subject of your essay was to explain what your perspective on Hip Hop is influencesing and is overcoming the world. I can comprehend that your nightmare made you want to write and share your essay. According to you Mr. Mc Bride you claim that “This music that once made visible the inner culture of America’s greatest social problem, its legacy of slavery, has taken the dream deferred to a global scale.” (paragraph #11). When you said this it made me realize that you are informing everyone that is overthrown with Hip Hop. Hip Hop is tie to social problems in which African Americans are dealing with the fact that there is unequal opportunity to attain the American …show more content…
In your essay you mentioned “Its structure is unique, complex, and at times bewilding whatever music it eats becomes part of its vocabulary, and as the commercial world falls into the place behind it to gobble up the powerful slop in its own wake, it methphorses into the the Next Big Thing.” (paragraph 8) . In my perspective this means Hip Hop is sending the same message like other geners, but instead they are using different lyrics in order to attract a larger croud and make it to the top charts. In my opinion vocabuarly that are at time used in Hip Hop can affect others but it can also help others. The reason I say this is because people at time add cursing to their daily vocabuarly instead of using other words. I agree Hip Hop has made this world into one of its own but from the observations I made Hip Hop influences and helps people connect back to their personal experienced or witness. For example, some artists talk about how society is in America and how drastically racism has evolved through the years it is not just about drugs,partying and gangs. In conclusion, I believe that your essay was powerful because you use hypocrisy to provide both sides and use real life problems going on in the world. I believe that you reflected on important