Analysis: Should College Athletes Be Paid

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The thesis in this text is clear and noticeable, it is “One of the most controversial questions; Should college athletes be paid?”. It is the second sentence, it states in the beginning what the author will be talking about. The central argument of the essay was why college athletes should not be paid. The author provides support for his opinion by stating some of NCAA’s rules. The author told an anecdote about when he was a college athlete. The author did not make any mistakes, that I am aware of, in his article. A part of this essay that I did not like was that, the author stated his opinion so early in the text. Once I read that he did not agree with my own opinion I started to get defensive, and I did not care as much about what he thought