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Blaze Brumfield's Persuasive Speech Analysis

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I was assigned to critique Blaze Brumfield’s persuasive speech about why we as a country should use renewable energy sources instead of nonrenewable energy sources. Overall, I believe Blaze did a fine job, but he could do a few things to improve his speeches. One thing that I believe Blaze did poor was conveying his subject to the audience. For me, I had to think about what the topic of the speech was. The audience should not have to think to themselves about what the speech they are listening to is about. In addition, I had a hard time following the information that he was presenting. He needs to be more thorough and explain more in nature about what he is talking about because some of his topics he talked about were complex and not
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