I will finish checking my essay, and unpack my evidence throughout the essay. Claim Throughout the essay “Apollo”, the significance for a adolescent to recognize themself in other person is explored and the challenges and impacts that get faced. This is shown through the use of overthinking, actions, text and dialogue. Which in the case of the essay the main character, is trying to discover who he really is, without making his conservative parents notice the “indecorous” behavior. Reason 1 During his childhood the main character suffered a terrible impact. He always felt the pressure to not disappoint his parents. This mostly consisted in academical work such as reading a book. Infact during the essay the main character seemed to have pressure while talking about a book, because he was” ordinary” , “basic”. …show more content…
The negative effects of regnozing himself in another person, is that he might have discussion with his conservative parents. Which I don’t think really let him think outside the box during his childhood. Ex evidence: of possible conservative parents This text that was taken from the essay proves that, the parents have a mindset that is pretty conservative. Which is probably why they didn’t let him think outside the box. One of the positive effect is that he can finally reveal himself for the person he really is to his surroundings. Not close himself to society and have imaginary friend. He finally recognized himself in another person after 12 years of being unsure of who he was. This extract from the essay “ I was twelve years old and had, until then, never felt that I recognized myself in another person. ‘ showed that all the moments that he spent hiding himself to society trying to understand who he really is and the embarrassment are finally over. That day was significantly substansial to his life, in fact it’s the start for his “new