He uses short sentences and repetition for effectiveness. It created pathos. The reader feels sentimental for the child they have created in their
He does not just give dates and times with events, he explains events in history as if he was sitting with someone telling the events of his life and what he experienced. Ellis does not keep his chapters in chronological order he just explaining events that happened. This grasps and keeps a person’s
Strauss starts to overthink the accident and he kept finding ways to make himself feel guilty. Strauss’s usage of these simple, short sentences made me feel as if he was having trouble speaking about the topic because it was such an intense moment. I felt as if he was choking as he tried to write it, which created a sense of emotional drama within me. Another example of Strauss’s dramatic tone: “Self-hate is rarely unconditional. I don’t pretend it’s
He uses very long compound-complex sentences using metaphors and descriptive adjectives to draw out the emotional impact of a common man being sent to prison. (I shortened a run on and added a sentence
He(the character) had internal conflict and external because he had found out something tragic that he will not forgive his father for what he had done in the past. The was some foreshadowing in the beginning so then they started to explain what have happen to that man hat have died. That would have gave the read some emotion to the story or thinking of the story of what they will be talking about or giving more info to answer the questions that the read had. “I wanted movement and not a clam course of existence. I wanted excitement and danger and the change to sacrifice myself for myself a superabundance of energy which found no outlet in our life.
In the book, "Long Why Down by Jason Reynolds shows us that the structure of texts can often impact the meaning. Some of the ways it incorporates this by 'sperating sentences, repeating words, and in a way talking to the reader. The first way this author uses structure to affect the meaning Is by separating words and sentences One of the ways this shows meaning is by portraying certain emotions such as contusion, anger awe, etc. In the book, the sentences are usually scattered and separated when the character is overwhelmed with many emotions.
Through listening to the emotional aspect of the case, it makes it harder for the audience to grasp the fact that a “nice boy like that” is a cold blooded killer, and makes it easier to be suspicious of any other characters. Through using pathos, the speaker is able to influence the audience to gain a liking towards Adnan, which she does by carefully crafting her story through the words she utilizes. Through acquiring a liking for Adnan, by the way Koenig displays his character, the audience starts to question his guilt. By tapping into the listener’s emotions, it makes it harder for the audience to
His story was not only a sequence of events, but also an adventure. He tells the story as if the reader is there and explains it as if the reader is a character standing there with the rest. He gives just enough insight and details for the reader to picture and imagine the emotions, details, and physical aspects of the event of the story taking place. He describes things in a way that can be understood for anyone reading it as long as the reader can handle the imagery written. In the story Jones keeps chronological order an important aspect of his writing while also giving insight on the events from evidence found in the future.
The structure of the story graphs out the narrator 's life in chronological order. Each year is unique by presenting new information about the narrator 's life along with simple conclusions within that year. Throughout the years, a reader can draw
By being chronological, the novella effectively illustrates the events as if they are happening in real time, the impact these events
Before Tim Piazza’s night begins, he reaches in a closet that “his mother will soon visit to select the clothes he will wear in his coffin.” After the night of “torture”, Tim’s family will be reunited one last time with “the redheaded boy they have loved so well” so he does not “die alone”. These pieces of wording are prime examples of the instrumentality of emotionally involving the audience in any piece of writing. When simple statistics and bland facts don’t seem to push Flanagan’s stance quite far enough, she turns to powerful, almost agonizing wording to complete the task. The language may be exaggerated at times, but it’s undoubtedly effective.
This is used to let us in on so much in so little time. Things are kind of broken up throughout this novel and never really in any sort of order. We often times see a sudden jump from events happening in reality to a thought in Esch’s or another character’s head. We get to know all about what is happening within the lives of the characters for the twelve days we know them. In addition, we also get the chance to learn about past experiences of multiple characters as well as being introduced to Greek mythology by
One of the most important qualities within a story is whether or not the narrator is reliable. In most cases, the reader never takes this “narrator” into question as it is some omniscient being who is easily forgotten. The cases, in which the narrator comes into play in the reader’s mind, are typically when the narrator is of homodiegetic narration. This is a common device in more narrative texts and can even be used as a tool to make the reader feel a more personal touch to the story. If this trust between the narrator and the reader is breached the whole story it can take a different look towards the reader.
At this point in the story, the reader begins to sense the theme of inaccurate perception and false accusation, for the
Instead he describes only a brief snapshot in these characters’ lives. This allows the reader to draw their own conclusions based solely on the image he creates in their minds of this one situation at this one point in
