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The Missing Girl By: Natalea Brennan
On March 29, 2006, a fifteen-year-old, high school student, Aria, didn’t arrive home after her shift at Walmart, where she had worked part time, after school. She attended Jacksonville High School, where she played basketball, softball, volleyball and ran track. She had an older brother Jack, who was 17, and a younger brother Redgie, who was 12. She was a smart girl, had straight A’s and was very popular. She has a boyfriend, Choen, whom she had just broke up with. Cohen was also a student at Jacksonville High School. He played football and basketball. Her best friend was Allie, who is 16 years old. They had been best friends since 1st grade and were inseparable.
School dismissed at 3:00pm. Aria went with Allie after school. They stopped at Sam’s Pizza, where Allie worked to get some pizza before Aria went to work. Aria’s shift began at 4:00 p.m. After they ate, Aria walked to Walmart which …show more content…

Aria is scared. They pull the cams at Walmart and see that her and Cohen ran into each other, and Alex said you really messed up, so the first suspect is Alex and Cohen. They were not guilty of taking Aria, but they were still suspects. Allie was also a suspect. Allie was so sad that someone had taken her best friend. Her family was so tore up that her brothers did not go to school for a month in a half. Her parents made a news report and said Aria, if you are watching this, come home and whoever took Aria, give her back and you will get caught. They ask anyone if they know where Aria is. No one knows. One guy, Zander looked very suspicious, so they took him in for questioning. He was found not guilty to. Then her parents decided to hire pro investigators. They got really close to finding the cabin another mile and they would have found

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