Creative Writing: The Giver

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The cave creature

William and Jonas had been on a party the night before and where not drunk, but they did not feel very well. They had planned to explore a big cave nearby and they were still going to do it. Since they were partying all night, Jonas slept over at William's place. Jonas has short, blonde hair, glasses and are a little bit taller than 1.80 meters. He wears shoe size 42/43 and weights 65 kg. He is not weak, but he is not very strong either. He is very fast though and he is a football star. He is also kind of clumsy and he is nearly always the person who slips or falls on the ground or crash in things. William has red/brownish hair and is also a little bit taller than 1.80 meters. He wears shoe size 46/47 and weights 108 kg. …show more content…

Luckily, they brought their flashlights and even more luckily, they were big so now they could lighten up the whole cave. They saw that it was deep as forever. They kept going further down and the rocks around where shaking and screaming of fear. It was so dark they could only see what the light reviled. they pointed the flashlight straight ahead, they could not see what was on their left side, right side or behind them.

They had no idea how long this cave was, but they were going to find out. They went further trough the darkness and it got creepier and creepier. They saw bats and some of them started to fly around them. They noticed a very strange thing. The bats in the cave got bigger and bigger as they got further down. A bat 100 meters behind, was smaller than a bat where they are now. They did not hesitate and they kept on going down.

They still couldn't see an ending inside the cave. They were surrounded by bats, bigger and bigger, and they started loosing their patience. Suddenly, they heard a scream. A scream with the biggest echo ever. It sounded like a dragon or sea monster or something. They turned their lights all around the cave but did still couldn't see …show more content…

It was a wall. The end of the cave. This is the end. It is actually nothing here, after all they did, it was nothing in the end but a mountain wall. This couldn't be true. They heard a dragon scream or something, that came from further down so this couldn't bee the end. They decided to go and tell this to the media. But two hours later, the opening of the cave was not there. It was blocked by something. Something big and, round and, purple and black. "Oh no, It's the biggest one", Jonas said. And it was. It was a trap. They were standing 3 meters from a 10 meter tall bat. It woke up, and screamed against just like the first time. The scream was so powerful that Jonas flew 10 meters away and William flew 6 meters away. They ran down again.

The bat was very big, but it was very slow. After not even an hour, they were nearly at the bottom of the cave again. Then a miracle happened. The monster bat, "The Cave Creature", stumbled in the humble rocks, and started to roll down towards Jonas and William. They managed to get out of the way and it rolled down and crashed in the mountain wall. They thought it died at first, but after a couple of minutes, it woke up, even angrier than before. They ran. They thought it would kill them, but when they looked back, they saw that it had fallen again. It was dead now. They were