Differences Between Chapter 22 And 23

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In chapters 22 and 23, I learned about the mistakes writers have in regards to sentence structure and wording. An idea that was emphasized immensely throughout these two chapters was that a writer should never repeat their ideas since it adds unnecessary information (CITE). This information was really important for me to learn since I have the tendency to repeat ideas or phrases due to the fact that I either forget that I had already wrote about them or because I feel my thesis needs to be emphasized more. As a result, I will thoroughly review my essays to make sure I remove any redundant information. Additionally, I will practice more ways of writing that will allow me to express the same idea of a paper just in a different format with extra