Evolve Persuasive Essay

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Have you ever had the thrill to do flips, be 20 feet in the air, learn new tricks, or even increase your skills? I am a 8th grade student at Silver Hills Middle School in Westminster, Colorado. Our 8th grade classes have started a project, that is for us to write letters to companies. I Collin Hough have chosen to write to Evolve Action Sports Park. I have been to Evolve many times in the past years since it has opened. I have had some great times at Evolve and so have my friends. My friends and I have enjoyed riding your park and having all different areas for all different types of riders from skaters, scooter riders, bmx riders, and inline skaters of all different skills. Evolves employees have been the most helpful every time I go and I have notes when the employees are caring and kind when helping people. To begin, Evolve is the best indoor park …show more content…

Well recently, when I would go to Evolve, it would be packed with a lot of riders. I have loved your skatepark ever since I have gone there because the skatepark is indoors, so it’s nice to have a skatepark indoors during the winter to ride at. It sucks that you haven’t made a new location because it has made my friends and I think that Evolve isn’t going to “Evolve” any time soon. Nowadays, my friends and I rarely go to Evolve to ride and it makes me feel that Evolve is going down. My friends strongly believe the same thing about a new location because they don’t enjoy when they go to ride when it’s so packed that they can’t even ride. Evolve should be recognized more because Evolve is a great place to learn new tricks, “Evolve” your skill, and help others grow, you should consider getting a new location. I advise you to take some time about this, but if you could, please get a new location in Westminster, Colorado. I hope you that the time to take this into consideration because it’s a great opportunity to “Evolve” the company. Thank’s for the