Comparing my first essay on generations and my most recent prompt on Fahrenheit 451, I am able to clearly see two different voices behind the writing. The first voice is inexperienced and overly casual for formal writing. It is filled with technical errors, such as inconsistent point of view, lack of comma use, and numerous informal words. The voice I read behind the first essay often contradicts itself and uses vague pronouns. It is the voice of a writer who proofreads once and calls it finished. However, the improvement is clear when I read my most recent prompt. The voice behind my prompt on Fahrenheit 451 is considerably clearer than the first. This prompt has few errors and efficiently analyzes the topic. My writing has changed significantly