Hi Rayshonda Analysis

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Hi Rayshonda, I love reading your interesting post. I was very excited reading the part where you mention that your mother was a dormitory director and living in the college campus was a requirement for your mother to get the job. My excitement change when you mentioned that you decided not to attend college. I understand that it was because you only were involved in the social life of the students. In my case it was very different. After my parents got divorced, my mother had to work harder, so she got a job in a sports unit. She worked two shifts since 7:00 am to 10:00 pm. After school I walked to my mother’s work and I was very motivated by the girls from the gymnastic team. The coach noticed my excitement and told my mother that I could