Michael Jordan, My Idol in life
I. Introduction
A. Hook: Michael Jordan once said “I’ve missed more than 9,000 shots in my career, I’ve lost almost 300 games, 26 times I’ve been trusted to take the game winning shot and missed, I’ve failed over and over and over again in my life, and that is why I succeed.”
B. Link: I’ve always wanted to become a great basketball player like my idol Michael Jordan who plays every basketball game like his last, but this fact will only come to reality in my dreams.
C. Divided Thesis Statement: Michael Jordan and I are worlds apart, but we also have similarities in life like the ability to never lose hope, to always work hard, and to always be thankful for everything.
II. Body
A. Topic Sentence 1: To not lose
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Supporting Detail 2: I don’t lose hope when I fail at quizzes or tests instead I study harder and persevere to pass in all my subjects.
B. Topic Sentence 2: It is essential for an athlete to work hard at his game in order to win.
1. Supporting Detail 1: Michael Jordan is called the G.O.A.T (Greatest Of All Time) because whenever he plays with his teammates during practice he treats it as a championship game.
2. Supporting Detail 2: I always work hard in my subjects so that I can pass and graduate this year. In sports I also work hard so that I am ready to face the challenges that will come in every game. For me, working hard and persevering comes hand-in-hand in order to reach one’s goal in life.
C. Topic Sentence 3: Everyone is taught to say thank you whenever someone gives you something because it is considered a blessing.
1. Supporting Detail 1: Michael Jordan never forgets to say thank you to everyone who helped him get to this level of his life. He thanks his parents, coaches, and God for everything they’ve done for him.
2. Supporting Detail 2: I never forget to thank my parents for bringing me to school, paying for my tuition fees, and for taking care of me. I also thank God every night for every blessing he has given me