The best example of me supporting my thesis was in the non fiction piece I had wrote about Michael Jordan. The way I wrote it was I described him during his whole life and then talked about his main career and how he became a legend and how everyone started to like him. The reason this was the best because the way I had brought the thesis into the story and then described it was good because there was a flow and it all made sense. A good point I did was right after I gave a little talk about him I went straight into the first paragraph talking about how his earlier life and what he did in the past. The story had a a flow because it went from the past to his best moments and how he got to where he is now and then it went to his current life.