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Middle School Descriptive Writing

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I sighed looking at myself in the mirror, I was pitiful. I was too thin, my wavy hair was a wild mess at this length and the only make up I could find was a 1950’s bright red lipstick. I don’t even want to mention the my outfit- the only thing I had that was could possibly be considered nice was a white buttoned down shirt and a pair of jeans that now hung too loosely on my body. God I was pitiful. I heard someone clear their throat and I looked up to see Paul standing in the door way. "You look beautiful." He lied- I looked awful.
I smiled anyway, sometimes it was nice to be lied to, "You clean up pretty nice too." He did, he wore nothing close to a suit but it was probably the closes he's ever been to one. He wore clean black …show more content…

It was an upscale restaurant where the only lightening was provided by low lit crystal chandeliers hanging above each table, casting a weird shadow over the smooth wooden surfaces. There were neat little booths lining a wall placed in the center of the restaurant and towards the back where couples sat snuggling and feeding each other in a disgustingly sweet way. The rest of the people sat at small tables leaning into each other and gazing into each other eyes. The ambiance was romantic but slightly a bit pretentious, like everyone here knew they were better than people eating at McDonald's and even places like Longhorn steak …show more content…

I smiled to myself, sometimes he took his self too seriously.
"Well it used to be red, I haven't given it much thought, but I guess its blue now- at least tonight."
"Why?"
He sighed and took another sip more like it was a shot than champagne. "This is going to sound like a line but I’m pretty sure the color of your eyes in this light is my new favorite color in the world. If you could see what I could I think you’d agree.”
I bit back a giggle, God he was corny.
"Yea that's corny, a little worse than you're more beautiful than the sky."
He laughed, "I don't know you're pushing it a little, I think the sky might be a little hotter than you, it does have all those stars."
"Damn I lost to the stars again, what is it about those pesky little stars?"
"There's something metaphorically beautiful about the way they light the night."
I laughed wondering where that came from, The Paul I knew didn't know words like metaphorically or maybe he did and he was just always too stoned to use words like metaphorically.
"Is this how un-stoned Paul

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