This poem was executed exceptionally well. You definitely thought outside of the box for this poem. Using the shape of the box to illustrate an error in itself was very clever. You definitely tested the way the poem could be read by the audience. The ambiguousness of how the poem is supposed to be read is allows the reader to interpret the poem in several ways. The way the poem is structured creates illustrates the brokenness expressed in the poem. It does not hide or code that there is something wrong. The diction used in the poem is also fitting to the theme. I found it interesting that Nero’s name was not capitalized in the third line. Nonetheless, it foreshadowed the end of line nine and beginning of line ten: “Finnegan’s not awake anymore.”