Outline Guide for Psychology Essay English 10 Standard This outline guide will help you to expand out your ideas before you begin drafting your essay. Write your thesis here: __In William Golding The Lord Of The Flies all defects in their society can be traced back to human nature. The way of human nature has defects and it’s within these defects that you find id,ego, and superego Body Paragraph 1: Claim: In human nature there is the flaw to want power and people to respect or fear you. Explain (make sure you include enough information that someone who’s never read your text can understand your reasoning). Its not the system that they had that was corrupt it was each individual person and their human nature combined that made a corrupt society. Support 1: (quote or paraphrase from book) What …show more content…
Support 2: (quote or paraphrase from book) What is happening in the story? Jack says "If you're hunting you catch yourself feeling as if you're not hunting but being hunted (53)" I think that this is a foreshadowing of what is to come of jack and how he is almost warning the group to watch themselves around himself. Quote and page number: "If you're hunting you catch yourself feeling as if you're not hunting but being hunted (53)" Conclude: How does that quote provide evidence of your claim? (Again, keep in mind the person reading your paper might not have read your text, so be thorough and specific). This quote proves my claim because jack very early in the book is warning the group that he will do what he has to do to get what he wants. Body Paragraph 3: Claim:When humans are put in a position of lower ranking they obey the head of power out of fear. Explain (make sure you include enough information that someone who’s never read your text can understand your