Personal Narrative Analysis

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Assignment Description: You will write a two page narrative from a different point of view. You will tell the story in first person. Your person will be experiencing a pivotal moment occurring in our world today. Your story will express a theme Your story should be double spaced, 12 point font. Arial or Times New Roman are acceptable font choices. Your work should span at least two pages. “Adios mama I love you”I said as I was walking out the door. “I love you two mi hija stay safe at school”My mother dearly said. Today is my first day of school, and my mom is already scared if we might get deported back to the other side.The worst part is, I am the only hispanic kid in all my classes. I was heading to school and my white neighbors …show more content…

Then all the kids like one voice said The pledge of allegiance. The class went on well until roll call they all said “here”when they were called on.I was last because I was the new student .The teacher said “Sophia Morales” the whole class turned around again this time my face turned bright red and hot.I tried to say here but my voice wouldn't budge .They kept staring like I was a monster or something. The teacher new It was me anyway so she marked me as present.Just a second later she said “class this is our new student sophia” . “Say hi Sophia class” It was silent no one dared to open their mouths. She said it again but this time some kids said it .She said “How rude of you to greet a new person like that”. “My name is Ms Thompson”.The rest of the day everyone just asked questions like Where are you from” how old are you” and so many more.As I was walking home I noticed that our front door was open and police cars were outside. I thought it was just for unpaid fines or something but then when I got inside my mom was in handcuffs on the floor and so was my dad I tried to free them but that's when I remembered “where are my …show more content…

“I think the police are going to deport my parents” I said to my brother and sister “todo estará bien”. As we waited wide eyed and shivering in the car another police man came and took us he said we are going to foster home .My heart started racing so fast I fainted. Both my siblings Juanito and Andrea sat in the car as we left to our new life. When I woke up I was lying down on a bed with a damp cloth on my head .I stood up to see that I was in a hospital but my brother and sister were nowhere in sight. I stood up looking around.A tall lady walked in with the policeman that took me and my siblings into the car.He stated “There she is” “She's all yours”. I asked the lady “who are you and where are my siblings”.She slowly but calmly responded that “they were in a Foster home”. I boomed “WHAT”!!! She nodded her like it was nothing .I stood Up trying to control my anger so i just started to cry my eyes out .The policeman slowly exited the