When first starting the essay, I had some trouble figuring out what exactly I wanted to write about. I had a lot of thoughts, but my problem was putting them all together in a manner that wouldn’t sound like a personal diary. It’s tempting to write everything I know and don’t know about myself, but I’m sure that that wasn’t the point of the assignment. As far as I can tell, everything I wrote in the essay is true. The only part that isn’t exactly correct is that I have a five-inch rubber ghost (it’s actually a mummy, but I changed it after your feedback). I do agree that a ghost works better than a mummy; it gives the story some more symbolism. Another thing I’d like to mention is that I tried to write the story from the perspective of that