Personal Narrative-Swim Analysis

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It is a hot, sunny afternoon and the air conditioning in the house broke. We try to keep cool, wearing as little as possible, but it just isn’t enough. We decide it is time to go swim in the lake behind our house. It’s our own private lake, but we hire a neighbor boy to keep it clean -He also cleans the pool. We change into our swimsuits, you choose your blue and black one-piece, and I choose my LEGO Star Wars swim trunks from eighth grade (they were loose when I got them). I pack a small picnic in case we get hungry. It is just the classic wicker basket filled with a cooler with two egg salad sandwiches. I also pack some water, lemonade, and barbeque potato chips. We wrap towels around our waists and walk up to the lake. It is a modest lake, …show more content…

You are not used to having someone run their hands where your swimsuit and shorts overlap. I won’t move on until you relax, so I spend plenty of time there. Eventually, I move up to your stomach and then to your chest. Your muscles are tense, so I make sure to rub them out before having fun with your chest. I move up your neck, switching from my hands to my mouth. I nibble up the side of your neck to your ears. I hold my breath as I nibble your ears so that it isn’t loud. When I move to behind your ear, I breath out through my nose, sending air down your neck and chills down your spine. I then lay down with you and we start to roll around, fighting for the top, and exploring each other’s bodies the whole time.
Eventually I get fed up with the layer of fabric separating our hearts, so I get to learn how to take off your swimsuit. It takes a little longer than a bra. Once that nuisance is out of the way, we feel the warmth of our bodies and it is a little too warm. I pick you up and take you into the pond again. The water is slightly chilly on your breasts but I keep them warm with my hands. We make out in the water until we get tired enough to go and take a pond-side nap together. When we wake up the sun is setting, so we sit up and watch it go down. At least, you watch it. I am watching the most beautiful thing I can see, which is you.
We pack up everything and go back to our house for

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