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Personal Narrative Techniques In Elie Wiesel's 'Night'

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I’ll start by saying I mainly agree with your statement. However, you were very vague leaving your statement with only claims and no evidence or examples. In the future I would highly suggest using examples instead of just saying “language related to death, darkness, night, and decay”. Also I found your last sentence to be repetitive and odd in the sense that you didn’t mention any of the “themes” specifically that you were referring to in the memoir Night. It appears that instead of responding to the prompt you restated the first few sentences in your own words. You should work on run-on sentences. However, I do understand the difficulty of rewording and adding another period. That could take like 2 minutes, and who has time for that! In conclusion,
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