Family Persuasive Essay

Hello, today I am here to propose a family that is moving from Shenzhen, China to Geelong West, Victoria, Australia. The Jun family includes a girl of 9 years, a boy of 12 years, a father with a part time job and a mother who is a doctor. The Jun family will be moving to Geelong, a small city out of Melbourne. They are moving from Shenzhen, a city in Hong Kong. There will be lots of opportunity for the kids and it is just outside of Melbourne, so the parents will have many job opportunities.

A similarity between the two countries is that they share the same time zone. This is good because the family will not get jet lag and they would know the time and are used to it, so they would be on time to school or work. Another similarity is the

How will they find it desirable? There are two main factors, push and pull. Some pull factors are more space. They have been living in a city for years, so they will like more then an apartment. Another pull factor is a low cost of living. In Australia there is a low cost of living compared to other countries. Victoria has the second-best education system in Australia, which means the kids will get good education and many opportunities. The two kids will have a variety of schools to attend which include Geelong college, Christian college, Geelong grammar school, Kardinia international college, St josephs, Highton primary school and St John’s Lutheran. This is a variety of private and public schools. Where they will live, Geelong West, there is a wide range of restaurants in Pakington street where they could have nice meals to eat. The father is looking for a part time job where he could be a waiter, a retail server, or a relief teacher because there is a wide variety of job opportunities in Geelong. The mother is looking for a job as a doctor. There is lots of doctor opportunities in Melbourne which is only a train ride

In Geelong the average housing price is around $700 000 to $900 000. In Geelong there is lots of entertainment, which includes soccer clubs, AFL clubs or games, indoor rock climbing, walking and bike tracks, movies, go karting and many more. Like I said before Australia also celebrates Lunar New Year, which is one of many other cultural places in Geelong like Chinatowns. Moving to Australia will mean there is a change in landscape and climate. In Geelong the it is mostly flat but there is a beach nearby which is another outdoor activity, this is pretty similar to Shenzhen. The average temperature this year in Shenzhen is 30 – 20, but in Geelong it is 25 – 10. This is a pretty big drop in temperature, so the family would have to get used to it. For the mom to work as a doctor she will need a skilled independent visa, which will allow her to work permanently in Australia, and she doesn’t have to be