Persuasive Essay About Online Friends

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People should be careful of having online friends, especially teenagers should be under control and supervision. This is because they may be deceived by online friends, and they would have fewer friends in real life. Also, they may cause problems for their families and themselves. SUPPORT Section 1 Having online friends can cause problems for a person. Unreal friends Sources Facing some liars “ Hoaxes” Idea 1 – Chayka, K. (n.d.) “It can be understood that online friends are less real than friends in real life” Idea 2– Hoax. (n.d.) “To lie to someone online by tricking him to believe something that does not exist in real life” “Trick a person by a bank account or financial information until accessing his account and money. Using a person's name and build up debts to him. Use a person's name to commit criminal …show more content…

(n.d.). “Twitter, Facebook, and online websites make people away from others without estimating it. When a family spends time together watching a movie, children are not focusing on the movie with their parents and not enjoying the moment because they are busy with their friends and online chatting.” Reduces family closeness SUPPORT Section 3 Being an online friends person can effect your emotions and causes problems for you. Emotional effects Sources Difficulty of making friends Idea 1 – Price-Mitchell, M. (2014) “Having online friends is harmful and horrible, because by using social media the person can not feel or sense the emotion from others. And that make them wondering if they mean what they say or not.” Idea 2 and Idea 3– Petre, J. (2013, February 2 “some experts have warned people that online friends and social networking obsession could have negative affect on their real life and relationships. Also, people may find it hard to have a real friend and difficult for them.” Problems with the family and friends SUPPORT Section 4 Sources COUNTERARGUMENTS Advantages of online