Persuasive Essay On Adopted Children

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I totally understand for their point of view with sharing and caring for other. Yes, some of them are working so hard to provide foods and goods for their family, or some of undocumented students cannot get supported at all from the government when they are trying so hard to study for a better future in America. However, I can refute my opponents’ idea by explaining that they are so right with the thinking of everybody are equal, and as human beings we should care and share with other, but we all have to think that we feel sorry when we see any poor kids out there who have no foods to eat or no house to live. But before people love someone who are not their kids, and they want to adopt them to be new family members. People need to love their …show more content…

It is an only way people can keep their family has positive environment for both blood kids and adopted kids because if the adopted kids do not follow the rules, they will destroy their new home by break up the family laws. From that idea, we need to teach our new immigrants that they need to follow the law first in order to keep a safety place and an economic prosperity for them to move in. People must not allow other take advantage of their goodness to do the wrong things, such as they are coming over here with unauthorized then find a way to stay back with legal document. Now, some students get stuck with difficult situation because of their parents ’error in the past that is a lesson for people who is thinking to get help from the government that they need to obey the government laws, so they can get help later. Also, people come over to work for agriculture, they can get work permit form the government, so they do not need to escape over with too much dangerous which can bereave their life. Moreover, if people allow undocumented be legal, for sure evil people will exploit from that to terrorist and ruin our country which had built with fair and a lot of respectable