Introduction:
“ If we don’t end war, war will end us.” said H. G. Wells. War destroys everything that people have; houses, family, dreams, bodies.. The civil war in Syria started from 2011 and still continues. The reason the war started was on 2011 some teenagers painted revolutionary slogans on the walls that was against the government so the government opened fire and killed many of them. The conflict got worse and by July 2011 thousands of people were on the streets and protesting. The government is bombing, firing, and using weapons against the country’s citizens.War does give power to certain people however war also ignores human rights in many ways, therefore government should stop war from happening. Body 1: Claim 1: Syria Civil War has been killing and injuring thousands of innocent people from using bombs, fires and chemical weapons.
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Elaboration 1: Not only the number of children are getting killed also the way those children have been killed is worse and heartbreaking. The children are did not do anything to the government. The only thing they did was go to school and play. Now all of these facts have been taken from their hands and leave as a dream in their mind. Evidence 2: According to United Nation, they had estimated that over 220.000 deaths of men, women, and children have been reported. Elaboration 2: After 3 years of civil war in Syria, many people have been killed, injured and suffered. It shows a devastating affect of war, a number of lives in seconds. The country now has a lot of people that lives were taken away from them.
Body 2: Claim 2: People are getting killed and they’re trying to protect their family so citizens are getting separated to other countries, therefore the conflict effects other