Mr. Muxley's Narrative Analysis

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EXT. GAS STATION - ALMOST SUNRISE
Mary stops to put some gas, she believed they were safe by now. But a black SUV passes by the gas station, Mary looks at it and she knows its one of Mr. Moxley 's man.
She rans back into the RV.

INT. MARY 'S RV - MORNING
Mary starts the RV and starts driving. She 's accelerating and looking back to see if she sees the SUV. The SUV shows up right in front of her. Mary tries to dodge, but she was going to fast, the RV crashes on a light pole. The kids awake up scared.
ALEX
What happened?
Alex walks towards Mary, her head is bleeding and she 's unconscious. He tries to wake her up.
ALEX
Mary, Mary are you okay?
He gets no response.
AMY
Oh my god Mary.
Dorian is walking towards Mary, Amy stops him.
DORIAN
What …show more content…

By killing your unborn baby?
MR. MOXLEY
They are not people. I 'm just trying to make the world a better place.
MARY
By killing children?
MR. MOXLEY
Your judgment is clearly very blurred by the idea that those things are real kids and they deserve to live. I don 't want to hurt you, I want you to see what I see. I get no pleasure in hurting human beings. But if you don 't help me find them, I 'll hurt you until you help me.

He chokes Mary, she 's crying in fear. He lets go.
MR. MOXLEY
I 'll give you some time to think.
He leaves. Mary starts to try and get rid of the ropes on her hands. She starts to move her chair closer to the table with the instruments for her torture. With some difficult she picks it a sharp knife with her mouth and throws on the ground. She starts moving on the chair until chair falls on the ground. She manages to get the sharp knife and cut herself loose. She puts the chair back in its place, she sits down and pretends that she 's still tied up, she holds the knife behind her back and waits for Mr. Moxley to come back. He takes his time until her comes back.
MR. MOXLEY
So, have you changed your …show more content…

You were right, we need to make the world a better place.
She gets up and stabs him in the hearts and twits the knife. She pulls the knife and stabs him again and again and again.
MARY
Without you the world is a better place.
The men in black are checking on Mr. Moxley, when they find him dead and Mary standing over his body holding a knife. They starts shooting at her and she falls on the ground. She smiles before she dies.
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INT. CABIN IN THE WOODS - NIGHT
Amy, Alex and Dorian are living in a small cabin in the middle of the woods. They are eating dinner sitting on the floor. They take their glasses and do a toast.
AMY/ ALEX / DORIAN
To Mary.
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