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Creative Writing: My Father's Journey

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Standing to the right of the starting line, I waited impatiently for the race. “It is just a race, I have done this hundred of times.” I remind myself. However, my stomach would not stop turning and my legs already feel like liquid, as if all the strength has drained out of them. Looking to my left, I saw a never-ending row of competitors, waiting to run toward the same finish line as I am.

My dad comes up behind me and when I turn, I see tears in his eyes. He is so proud of me, and I know then that no matter how I do, he’ll be there when it’s over. He gives me a big hug and I can feel that he is even more nervous than I am.

“Good luck,” he whispers; he can’t say it too loud or his voice will crack. That’s when I lose it. Great. Now I’m crying.

Looking over his shoulder, I see my mother. She’s waiting for her turn …show more content…

It’s all stuff I’ve heard before, but for some reason, this time, it just seems much more complicated.

With one more good-luck pat on the back, Mr Vincent is gone and I’m left alone with my nerves. Then comes the dreadful shout, “Runners, on your marks!” A wave of nausea sweeps through me but I force it down. This is my race.

With a loud crack, the gun goes off and a few hundred runners headed out at a sprint, trying to get to the front of the pack. Screams come from all sides, making it hard to focus. Forcing the noise from my mind, I move forward quickly, my adrenaline flowing, trying to get me to go faster even though everything feels like Jell-O.

In no time, a mile has passed and I am somewhere in the middle of the group. I have the taste of blood in my mouth and it has been a while since I last felt my legs. My lungs burn, and my feet are hurting in my too-small running spikes. I put all my effort, both physical and mental, into keeping my pace. I have to do well for everyone who is here supporting me. I have to do well for

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