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Ray Bradbury's The Veldt: Craft Moves

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The Veldt: Craft Moves

Ray Bradbury, the author of the dystopian story “The Veldt” applies many craft moves throughout his story. Some craft moves he includes is dialogue, foreshadowing, metaphors, and similes to build up the imagery in his story. The imagery he uses in the story helps the reader understand what the setting is like and what the story is trying to tell you. “The veldt” is in a totally different setting than the reader’s world. It seems to be set in the future, with all the technology the main character’s family have. Ray Bradbury was able to set up the imagery by having other craft moves give a helping hand, which helps the reader understand and imagine what the setting is, which can help the readers understand the message …show more content…

Although he uses dialogue several times, an example from the story is “‘I’m afraid.’ She came to him and put her body against him and cried steadily. ‘Did you see? Did you feel? It’s a little too real’” This shows how Lydia, who is not a main character and we cannot see into her mind is thinking, because she said a few of her thoughts out loud. Another piece of dialogue further into the story that is found is “‘I don’t remember any Africa,’ said Peter to Wendy. ‘Do you?’” This shows the other characters, which are characters the narrator can’t see into the minds of, what they are thinking, because as mentioned before, they are speaking their thoughts out loud.

The author utilizes many pieces of foreshadowing in his story. The foreshadowing that is included builds up the suspense in the reader's mind. When suspense is created it can promote the imagery throughout the story. One example of the foreshadowing in “the veldt” is “Two screams. Two people screaming from downstairs. And then the roar of lions.” with “‘Those screams - they sound familiar.’” This kind of foreshadowing builds up suspense by having the leader guess what could happen next, and the reader will keep on reading to see if what they were thinking is what's going to

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It also gave the readers sense of understanding, they really open our minds to why the characters do the things they do. Throughout the foreshadowing examples I have shown you: When the readers first learn about the button, Secondly when the readers start to see that Norma wants to press it, and last when she does press the button. We realize how selfish Norma is. Would you be so selfish like Norma, to push a small little button that would make someone die? If you are going to push the button, would it be for the reason you get

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Transported into the future, Ray Bradbury paints a picture in the reader’s head of the Happy Life Home, filled with technology to fit everyday needs. A family, mom, dad, and two kids, start to slowly fall apart because of being surrounded with technology. In The Veldt, Bradbury uses multiple examples of author’s craft such as personification and tone or mood to help prove and point out a theme included in his story. His theme contained in the story is, influencing children with so much technology early on can not only stir up violent thoughts but, can also cause breaks between friend and family relationships. The first author’s craft that can prove this theme to be true is personification.

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The foreshadowing that happens throughout the story points to the interconnectedness of all actions. The example of the hand and the time machine, as well as others, plant the idea of interconnectedness before the reader even knows the outcome of the story. This is effective in predisposing the reader to the theme. The preview of the theme through foreshadowing makes the reader interpret the plot more clearly as the story concludes. Ultimately, this leads the reader to a realization that all actions, no matter how big or small, shape the

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It gives the reader subtle hints about characters and their situations, clues to events that might happen, and it conveys necessary information about the story. In addition it can also tease or mislead the reader into thinking that something might happen that actually does not. In the novel Of Mice and Men, Steinbeck uses foreshadowing to give hints and clues about what might happen in the end of the book. If a writer fails to include some form of foreshadowing, there is a possibility that an incident or occurrence will happen too quickly and leave the reader confused and wondering why that particular event was not mentioned earlier, or why they are connected.

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Two pieces by Ray Bradbury, Fahrenheit 451 and The Veldt, both share the theme that society and technology shouldn’t affect the actions people take, however, this theme is portrayed differently in each novel. To start, The Veldt leads to the theme that society shouldn’t affect the actions people take, but it conveys this theme differently than in the novel Fahrenheit 451 because, in The Veldt, the mom and dad are very ignorant of the problem that is occurring. On page 27, the parents are told by a psychologist that the technology in their house is ruining their children. “In this case, however, the room has become a channel toward destructive thoughts, instead of a release away from them.”

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One example is when they bring the Veldt Room to life by all of the mechanics that show the sound, smell, and even temperature. “The hot straw smell of lion grass, the cool green smell of the hidden water hole, the great rusty smell of animals, the smell of dust like a red paprika in the hot air. And now the sounds: the thump of distant antelope feet on grassy sod, the papery rustling of vultures.” This shows how realistic everything is and that you don’t have to leave your house to get an experience of an African Dessert, The way Bradbury appeals to all of the senses to give the reader the experience as if there standing next to George in the African desert, he gives something that is till and a place, a life and makes it seem so much more alive than it is. Bradbury uses the phrase “the papery rustling of vultures.”

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