Writing a major essay is never an easy task. It takes a lot of hard work and input from other individuals in order to make the essay the best it can be. When it came to writing about the experience of my mother’s death I thought about excluding some of the details, but I thought my writing deserved to tell the whole truth not just part of it. I’ve talked about this experience before, but have never gone into complete detail. Consider yourself lucky because now is the time I have decided to really open up in my writing through this essay.
In class the examples were very helpful when it came to this writing process. I really appreciated being able to read “No More Legos” because it gave me the idea to not make my essay entirely serious. At times it is good to be serious in writing, but not all the time. It can make the audience tired and lightning up my story by word choice was a key move.
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She said she loved how descriptive it was which really surprised me. The next day in class I also received great reviews about what molded me into who I am today. Bridget told me to add the cause of my mother’s accident to my paper. Under my review I stated that I wanted to incorporate more imagery into my essay. Then Rachel had only positive criticism, yet what stuck out to me the most is that Nicole commented on “What did you overcome?” It took me awhile to discover what was, later that will be