Assignment Title: Text Analysis Exercise
Introduction
Charlotte Perkins Gilman was best known for her writings regarding the unequal status of women within the constraint of marriage. Gilman, as a sociologist and a reformer, argued that women’s traditional role in domestic sphere confined their creativity and intelligence. The text to be analyzed here is a remarkable work of Gilman’s: the short story The Yellow Wallpaper. The story is set in 1892 and is told in strict first-person narration in the form of a journal by a woman who suffers from depression. Her physician husband, John, suggests that she should stay in a mansion in the suburbs for “rest cure” treatment. The forced passivity leads to her realization of her powerlessness thus gradually
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Instead of an omniscient narrator, the first person point of view provides the readers a limited perspective on how the incident unfolds. It focuses exclusively on her own thoughts, perceptions and feelings; and the detail-oriented depiction towards her observation has become a stream-of-consciousness mumbling to the journal.
In this essay, I will first identify the non-equivalence at a word level among the source text and the target text. Then I will attempt using the device of lexical cohesion identified by Halliday and Hasan to examine the output of translation. Finally, I will analyze the difficulties in translating the technique of “stream-of-consciousness” writing at linguistic level and semantic level.
Equivalence at Word Level
In The Yellow Wallpaper, there is a constant use of “creep”. Since the narrator first noticed the woman in wallpaper, she used “creepy” to describe the odd-looking shape, foreshadowing the desperation. Here are some example sentences:
• And it is like a woman stooping down and creeping about behind that pattern.
這看起來像一個女人在那圖案後方鬼鬼祟祟的
-> it looks like a woman sneaking behind the pattern.
• I hate to see it sometimes, it creeps so slowly […]