The Amount Of Power Revealed In Homer's Odyssey '

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Original: Penelope was able to survive on her own even as the odds were against her, but she never would’ve achieved the goal of getting rid of the suitors with the amount of power she possessed.

Correction:
Penelope was able to survive on her own even though she is at a disadvantage, but she could never meet the goal of getting rid of the suitors with the amount of power she possesses.

Rule:
Past tense verbs
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Original:
One could argue that Penelope used this plan as a long-term solution ultimately making her equal to Odysseus, but not only could someone else argue the opposite, in addition to the situation Odysseus saved her in the end after confidently revealing