The Legend Of Abby's Narrative Fiction

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One day, there was a girl named Abby. She lived in a foster home because her parents died. She hated living in the foster home, she had friends but not many. The guardian was not polite, rude and especially mean to Abby. So one day, she chose to leave at 10:00 pm to visit her Grandma Beth. She lives in an elders home. Abby stopped by the gas station to buy something to eat. Abby was scared alone at night. She bought some orange juice and a candy bar. Abby was not able to afford it. The cashier said “It is on me, don't worry.” Abby said thank you in happiness. As she left, she heard a gunshot. bang! It was an old man in a coat who shot the cashier. He approached Abby and said “What is your name.” she replied Abby in fear. The police arrived …show more content…

They were all wondering what happened and she was over flowed by questions. One of the officer's name was Michael. Abby told him what happened. Michael said you need to help us and it is not safe anymore at your place.” Where am I going to stay said Abby. At my house. She was very surprised and excited. Let's go said Michael. They had her look through the grocery store near town to see if Abby recognizes the old man in the cameras. She looked through the first bunch and did not see him. She went to Michael's and she loved it there. She got Twinkies every day and they have a dog.Abby always wanted a dog. She visited the shelter every day to help. As she fell asleep, she could not stop thinking about how nice her life is. the next day, she checked on her grandma. She was the closest family member she had. Sadly her grandma had a heart problem and was in the hospital. She cried for a long time.(rising action) Abby could not bear losing another precious family member. The next day she looked at more footage for the recent crime scene. 1 hour later, she finally caught him, but she hesitated to tell the officers. Abby realized she is in a better place and hates the foster home. “No i don't see him i'm sorry.” “It's