The Overuse Of Language In The Great Gatsby

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Sometimes it’s better to keep things straightforward. The next example is overflowing with verbiage, He munched four of these, finding them of pleasing savor, and then consumed another double-chocolate jigger before ease descended upon him. After a cursory inspection of the pillow-cases, leather pennants, and Gibson Girls that lined the walls, he left, and continued along Nassau Street with his hands in his pockets.” Fitzgerald uses the English language in a flowery way to be honest, it was hard for me to understand what was being said in the example, even after putting it in context. One serious barrier here is the overuse of complicated words and slang, I’ve never heard of a jigger shop or a jigger in general. The same problem occurred with