“I am going to blow them off the face of the Earth with the fury of God's own thunder.”
These were the words of President Josiah Bartlet upon hearing the devastating news that Morris
Tolliver, his physician and friend, had been killed in an unprovoked and cowardly attack by
Syrian operatives upon a United States military aircraft. Through the heartfelt connection its characters inspire and the delivery of its plot and dialogue, The West Wing has earned its place in the pantheon of great television shows. Part of the show’s greatness comes from the relationship forged between the cast of characters and the viewers. The anguish felt by longtime fans when the beloved Deputy Communications Director Sam Seaborn left the White House and the joy experienced when
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Another reason for its greatness is that the gravity of the plot and dialogue was never lacking, but what truly set them apart was the way in which they were delivered. Chills are sent down the spines of viewers whenever they hear President Bartlet’s rousing speeches such as his speech and praise of the Kennison State students who ran back into a fire to save their fellow classmates, “The streets of heaven are too crowded with angels, but every time we think we have measured our capacity to meet a challenge, we look up and we're reminded that that capacity may well be limitless.” The West Wing should especially be watched during this contentious election year because it displays how politics in the United States ought to be.
+ Overall, it was very good. The second sentence got a little confusing, but it could easily be fixed by changing some words around. The examples and quotes were very nice, and helped to tie the paragraph together. Examples of why the show was so great are clear, and the concluding sentence was clear and was a good transition into main paragraphs.
The topic sentence was good and is