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Thesis Statement For Panopticism By Michel Foucault

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Ms. Hoffman, I hope you are doing well and that your schedule is not too hectic with junior and senior English classes all day! If you have time this weekend, I was wondering if you would be willing to look over an essay I am currently writing for my honors composition class. We had to read "Panopticism" by Michel Foucault and, much like your class, we had to choose our own arguments to write about with a thesis statement. I received a 95% on the first paper I wrote for this class, but my professor advised that I use more clarity in my essay. She is really trying to have our class avoid vague language and have each statement be meaningful in some way. Please do not feel pressured if you do not have time, I would completely understand! If

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