I. Introduction Paragraph
a. Hook (questions without the word you, a quote related to topic, etc.): “what greater punishment is life when you’ve lost everything that made it worth living.” William Shakespeare. William shakespeare has a ton of life lessons in romeo and juliet. Like in romeo and juliet romeo said “what greater punishment is life when you’ve lost everything that made it worth living.” He made the decision to kill himself because of his emotions. Your emotions don't control you, you control them. Most of them are hidden in the words. You can take the words and turn them into any lesson you want. That is why it is important for kids now days to read it, So they can get some kind of lesson. It also teaches us about the english language and how
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Thesis statement: 21st century students should read romeo and juliet because romeo and juliet can teach that Violence can be avoided, It can teach you of the english language, and can teach to not make decisions out of emotions.
II. PEEL Body Paragraph 1
Point: First, Violence can be avoided even if there was an issue between two people or groups. When you want to fight or get violent there is another way.
Evidence: For example, “I disagree, I've never done you harm… You should be satisfied with what i say.”
Explain: When tybalt and romeo are arguing, Romeo doesn't want there to be violence even though he was raised to hate the capulets. Even if you were born to hate someone you do n't have to resort to violence, make your enemies your friends. Not all the time do you actually hate someone.
Evidence: Another example, “I must indeed. That's why i came here… say a madman told you too run.
Explain: This can mean as if one of the people in an argument doesn't want to get violent. They might just want to work issues out and not get violent. There isn't always a reason to hurt or kill someone. You can always work through it for the most part.
Link: When there is an issue violence is not always the