What The Dogs Could Teach Me Analysis

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Out of all of the stories, “What The Dogs Could Teach Me” by Gary Paulsen and “The Sniper” by Liam O’Flaherty, “Flowers” by Alice Walker had the best description. “Frayed, rotted, bleached, and frazzled-barely there-but spinning restlessly in the breeze.” With this quote, you can easily picture the old noose swaying in the breeze. A quote from “The Sniper” says “His hand trembled with eagerness.” Unlike the other passages, “The Flowers” creates a vivid image in your mind of what’s going on in your story. As you can see, “The Sniper” gives less vivid details so you can’t as good of a picture in your mind. Another good example of description in “Flowers” is “The air was damp, and the silence was close and deep.” This quote really helped with