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What You Pawn I Will Redeem Analysis

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What You Pawn I Will Redeem I feel that the story “What You Pawn I Will Redeem” could have been presented in a more compelling manner. I even skipped the parts where he just got drunk and went off with women- it made me uncomfortable and I can’t identify with Jackson when he is drunk or sick. I had difficulty reading his mistakes- it just made me bored and angry. The story could have been more interesting.

Jackson’s character could have been presented in a way that made me sympathetic for him; instead he blamed his circumstances rather than taking responsibility for himself and his actions. The homelessness was not all his fault, but we never heard what happened- only that it was the government’s fault and he should have had more opportunity.
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