Claims Of Juvenile Profiling

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Author: Reader: Claim I was unable to follow your claim because you mention the word juveniles; maybe you are trying to refer to juvenile detention center? In your second paragraph you mention the causes that you are going write about and then you asked a question that said,” could this be the reason that so many young adults are in jail instead of being in a juvenile?” When you use the word could in your question it made me wonder if you are assuming instead of being certain. Evidence for the claim You have great stories, but I believe you need to support you claim with statistics and facts. Evidence provided does not support the main claim. The essay did not have a work-cited page. Organization and style The connection among the claim