“We hold these truths to be self evident: that all men are created equal; that they are endowed by their Creator with inherent and inalienable rights; that among these are life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness…” Many American citizens can read the famous quote from above and know that the quote comes from our Declaration of Independence. The well known document that served to separate the United States from Great Britain, and lead the United States to war with Great Britain, so that the United States could gain its independence. If the rough draft of the Declaration of Independence and the updated version of the Declaration of independence are compared, then it can be seen that the two drafts are very similar, but also very different. For the purpose that the declaration served, to separate the United States from Great Britain, I believe the second draft is better suited for the job of separating the United States from Great Britain. …show more content…
The one that I find the most throughout the drafts is grammar and punctuation. In the first draft there are many mistakes with mostly capitalization and spelling, but there are also a few other mistakes in there as well. The second draft is written perfectly with hardly no errors at all. I really thought this stood out because when a paper is written with a lot of errors and mistakes, the reader often times doesn't take the writer seriously, and maybe would even think that the writer is unintelligent. With the Declaration having little to no errors it shows that the people of the United States mean