Creative Writing: Aelia's Pain

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Aelia could feel her heart picking up a frantic beat as she heard him move towards her in the water. Was this it? Was it time for their bodies to join? She knew of the pain that would come - it was natural for every woman, but Spartan women were taught not to fear the pain. The pain was their final test, how they weathered it would determine if they were fit to bare Spartan children for their father's noble blood line. And there was no blood more worthy than her Father's! Aelia closed her eyes and took in a deep breath to prepare herself...but pain never came. Instead she felt his hands take a firm hold of the round, smooth skin of her rear and begin kneading it. He caressed and tugged at the skin, spreading her so that he could get a better look at her. Aelia was never taught to be ashamed of her nakedness but all the same she felt a rush of heat touch her face as she realized he was …show more content…

Aelia let out a loud gasp and arched her back in an instinctive reaction to the sudden surge of pleasure that took almost as tight a hold of her as her Father's hands. A low moan rippled from the back of her throat and made her legs shiver under the weight of the passion and pleasure he was giving her. By all the gods! Surely not even Ares pleasured Aphrodite as well as his tongue was pleasing her! Aelia felt her hips slowly rolling back into his lips as she craved more and more of that touch. It was instinct. It was the basest, more primal instinct. Pleasure. Giving and oh the sweetness of receiving! She felt her fingers pressing into the stone floor, curling her digits so that her top knuckles rubbed against the hard ground. Her breaths came in deep gasps and moans that echoed through out the bath house and made the rest of her body shiver in the deepest desire. She had known that men sometimes pleasured women in vast ways...but never had she ever imagined this would be done to her - for