“The Sixth Seal” by Mary Wesley was not a good book. I could not stay focused or get into the book. I am going to critique the story and tell you what I didn 't not enjoy. I did not enjoy the lack of good detail, there was also not a good plot and most of all I did not enjoy the format it was written in. I am going to critique the story “The Sixth Seal” by Mary Wesley. “The Sixth Seal” had a lack of detail. The main character named Muriel was never truly described. The whole story the only thing you you really about her is that she is a 45 year old woman with brown hair. You never learn anything else about the other two main characters too. all you hear is their age and hair color. I wish the story would have gone into more detail about the …show more content…
There were interesting events taking place, but those events were so badly written and were in such a bad order that I did not enjoy them. Mary Wesley is a world renowned writer and I have read another one over her stories and it was full of detail and I truly enjoyed it. This story on the other hand was lacking a well written format. If I had written the story it would have been in one day to another format. I also would have added lots of detail and happy and sad moments. Most of all I would have made a true conflict with a real character. “The Sixth Seal” by Mary Wesley was not well written or in any specific format. If you had the choice of reading a well written book or a poor written book which would you choose? I personally think that is an easy decision. I struggled while reading “The Sixth Seal” by Mary Wesley and would not read it again. “The Sixth Seal” by Mary Wesley lacked detail, did not have a well written plot and most of all was not written in a good format. If you struggle while you read a story it is harder to read and you will not enjoy it. I am not planning on reading the “The Sixth