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Gyorgy Ligeti's 2001: A Space Odyssey

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Your introduction is eye catching because you are giving a unique perspective on this important film. The emphasis on the changes of our planet, is probably the most talked aspect of this movie but is only a small part in what makes the movie great. Anyone can talk about the progress we have made, however they cannot tell it in a way people like Stanley Kubrick, Arthur C. Clarke and Gyorgy Ligeti can. Our society has a tendency to overly condense lots of things, among them being “2001: A Space Odyssey” and your introduction says that it will not which builds the pathway to an intriguing essay.

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1: Change the first sentence because it feels like there was something written before it. I would suggest mentioning the common trend

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