Haiku Poem Changes

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I made a lot of changes to my poems. For my haiku poem, I formatted it so it can be 5,7,5 syllables. For my ekphrasis poem, I tried to more specific. I talked about where the protesters are praying and their reason and I wrote more details about what happened after they prayed. For the ode poem, I made it first person because it strengthens the love I have for the painting. Before I just wrote descriptions about the poem, but it never really showed why I love the painting. For the rant/job poem, I changed the format of the poem into paragraphs, so it is easier to read. In addition, I added more problems about working at Office Depot. The changes that were made in the sonnet is the format of it. Before my sonnet did not match the format of each