Jack's Game Analysis

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Jack is excited for the hockey tryouts he’s hoping to make a better team for his club but the kids on that team are very good. Jack is the best on the stars but there team is not good, jack has never really gave extra practice or show the coaches he really wants to be on the team. A few days later jack gets home from school. When he walks thru the door his mom says ’’You made the stars” in a happy way I guess she likes this team. Jack was not so happy about the team. When jack went to school and everybody was asking what team he made jack did not want to answer them but he had to so he told them. All of jack’s friend made the All-Stars. Jack’s team last year was 2-34-1 and they were not that good. The lead goal scorer was jack with 67 of …show more content…

He is going to try harder than he has any other year because this year he really wants to be on the All-Stars next year. Jack's team struggles this year to jack stands out with his two friend on offense but they still need a new strategy to win there games there coach doesn’t make a lot of plays. They are almost done with the season with two games left. They lost the first one 12-6 and the second one 13-5 his shift scored all of them Jack scored five of them. Now they are starting playoffs the All-Stars are in first and the Star are in last in separate …show more content…

Jack’s shift scored the most goals Liam (2) jack (2). When Jack's team lost kids on the older team were making fun of jack’s team even though Jack didn’t like his team he still stuck up for them and him. So they went to the older teams locker and put a paint bucket over the door. They all walked in and the team got paint all over them for revenge. Jack’s starts to rent the ice when his season ends. He works on skating and shooting. By the end of the practice he had you could see the white netting covered in black spots. Jack went again the day after, at the end of the practice he stepped off the ice and a coach from the All-Stars stopped him and said ‘’Wow your very fast and have a good shot, you should tryout for our club.” Jack told him “I mainly work on skating and shooting, yeah i'm going to tryout i play on the Star.” Jack sat down for dinner in his head he was thinking tryouts already he didn’t feel prepared. They had their first tryout and jack thought he was doing just as good as anyone else out there. Then the second and last tryout came this year there making the teams on the