Lorenzo's Revenge: A Fictional Narrative

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The revenge
It was a hot day as usual in Miami, but it was not an ordinary day in the life of Lorenzo and her father.

“ Dad, would you like to take a walk with me in the park, relax a little, and talk?” Lorenzo said.

“Of course, you know I’ve been very stressed because of work and problems with your brother.” He replied.

When they arrived at the park they began to talk as they walk, when suddenly they saw some guys running away from the police. The father of lorenzo grabbed one of the guys thinking he was Jose his son, but it was only a confusion.

“ Hey son, what are you doing running?” He ask.

“Shut up viejo, I’m not your son.” He replied.

“ Can you tell me who you are then!” He exclaimed.

“I’m Juan, Juan Hernandez, and now …show more content…

“Dad you need to resist, the police is coming right know.” He begged.

“ I think I’m not going to resist son, please take this rosario.”He said.

“I promise you, that he will pay for what he did to you dad.” He replied.

Two years later Lorenzo started to plan his revenge, he started to going to the police school, he wanted to became a police officer and tried to find Juan, the person who kill his dad, and he did, he became a police officer.

“Now the revenge started.” He said.

He was a regular police officer, every single day he was doing his duty, but he had never forgotten what he had promised his father. One day after months, he received one call that one man was stealing a store.

“Yes, of course that I know that store.” lorenzo said.

After a few minutes he arrived to the store, but he notice one particular face.

“I know him, I’m sure that I had seen him before.” He murmured.
He was thinking about it, and he remembers that it was Juan, the same person who had killed his father. He immediately began to react.

“Put your hands behind your head.” He yelled.

Juan recognize Lorenzo face, and start laughing at

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