Megan Shull's Excerpt 'Bounce'

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In the excerpt “Bounce” Megan Shull uses the craft moves Comparison, short sentences, and descriptive words to show that Frannie's family is different, and how it makes Frannie feel. In the beginning,The author uses the craft move Comparison to show Frannie’s family is different than a normal family. The excerpt says,”My family is not the type of family that has meeting”.(Pg 11) In that quote Frannie is trying to explain how her family in different. This helps move the plot forward by, letting you know in the beginning of the excerpt that there family is not the average family, so you understand the excerpt later on. In the middle of the excerpt, the author uses the craft move short sentences to show the tension between the family. The excerpt