Misguided Decisions In Romeo And Juliet

(HOOK) Novelist Sean Covey once wrote, “We are free to choose our paths, but we can't choose the consequences that come with them.” His statement compels the reader to realize the effect that results from their actions. (CI) In the same way, William Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet is an exceptional example of how misguided decisions lead to dire consequences. (GS1) While reading, one discovers how a personality trait can develop unwanted repercussions. (GS2) On the other hand, it is evident that being misinformed or not completing a necessary task can produce an unfavorable outcome. (GS3) Most importantly, failing to notice the harm being caused can be indirectly affecting the lives of many. (THESIS STATEMENT) The outcomes in William Shakespeare’s

(RE-WORDING OF MAJOR A) As the play progresses, it is apparent that Romeo’s decision to fight Tybalt produces a downward spiral of bad events to occur. (MINOR 1 FOR MA) After Romeo realizes that Tybalt had killed one of his best friends, he makes the rash decision to immediately challenge Tybalt to a duel. Romeo knew he needed to avenge Mercutio’s death and would not stop until Tybalt, himself, or both of them died, “Staying for thine to keep him company. / Either thou or I or both must go with him” ( 3.1.533). (MINOR 2 FOR MA) Once Tybalt had fallen, Romeo realizes the damage he had done. Not only had he killed his wife’s cousin, but his punishment is banishment. Being banished meant he could no longer live inside the walls of Verona with his family and new wife, Juliet. In his eyes, being executed is better than banishment. It is apparent that after Romeo’s banishment the play takes a turn in a dreadful direction. (RE-WORDING OF MAJOR B) Romeo’s audacious decision to end his life does not only impact him but lives of various other characters in the play. (MINOR 1 FOR MB) Since Romeo is misinformed, he is under the assumption that Juliet actually had died. Little does he know she is just in a deep sleep to avoid the unwanted marriage with Paris. After seeing Juliet’s “dead” body in the mausoleum, Romeo is completely heartbroken. He immediately realizes that life without Juliet is worse than death, so he drinks the poison and utters, (MINOR 2 FOR MB) “Here’s to my love! O, true apothecary. / Thy drugs are quick. Thus, with a kiss I die” (5.3.578). Despite what Romeo thought before he dies, Juliet is still alive and after awakening to see Romeo lying dead in the tomb, the same thoughts raced through Juliet’s head. She quickly attempts to commit suicide with the hope of