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Personal Narrative: My Hero's Journey

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Space Mountain towered over me as my family walked up to it. It would be the first ride we would do in Disney World, and I was not excited and I never liked roller coasters so I knew it would not turn out well.` “ Come on Natalie. See if you tall enough my dad exclaimed in excitement. The ruler of space mountain was right by the entrance. I put my little self up to the ruler. I looked up at my dad as he looked right at my head. I was a little short. I took a deep breath as I let a big weight of my chest. “YES! I don’t have to ride this death trap!” I thought. I looked over at my dad, but he had a big smile on his face. He said, “It’s ok, you are almost there. Come on.” “Dad!” I yelled in my eight year old voice, my brown pigtails bouncing, …show more content…

Piercing screams. I did not want to go on. Every inch of my body shook. About 20 min went by and I was reconsidering about the ride. “Maybe it will be fun. I don’t want to go! This will be amazing! No no!” I didn’t know what to think. Finally, we were up next. My head filled with thoughts as I got in the front. “REALLY!? I have to get in the front! Out of all the places.. the front?!” I was mad. I didn't understand why I had to go in the front and my mom, brother or dad didn't. I slowly got into the cart. Why can’t I ride in the middle?! Kids, parents and grandparents got in the carts and it slowly went through a pitch black tunnel. I started getting scared. I couldn't see anything all I could see were little white stars. All of a sudden… JERK! The cars skidded. It zoomed up and down. The wind blowing in my face. It was …show more content…

DAD!” I wanted it to stop. I didn't care if it was in the middle of the ride. The carts kept jerking, going up and down as my stomach dropped. I saw fake shooting stars flying across my face and I leaned every way it was jerking me around. Finally, I could see the end. A bright tunnel slowly came near as I got relieved. We slowly went into the tunnel, and and I could see the normal waiting room. Everyone was talking and the normal glow was on my face one last time. I was frozen. Everything that happened just went by in a flash. It was the worst time in my life. All of a sudden I felt something coming. I tried to fight it back but I

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