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Personal Narrative: The Door By Alisyn Zigelstein

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When a 17 year old boy named Ethan with OCD (Obsessive Compulsive Disorder) finds himself with the lives of young children in his hands, It is up to him to save them. Will he go in or will he leave “The Door” forever. Not only leaving “The Door” but the children… leaving them to die.

The Door

written by: Alisyn Zigelstein

As I approached the closet door I could hear the eerie chiseling noise coming from within, like nails on a chalkboard. The screams of little girls crying out for help, to think they would be locked in there forever if I didn't go in. Their lives were dependant on me, Would I do it or would I leave, not just leaving the door but leaving those innocent children’s lives. leaving them to die. I thought to myself for what felt like an eternity and decided that I had no choice. I was not the kind …show more content…

3 times, always 3 times. Never 4. Never 2. Always 3. I searched listening but as I seemed to get closer the voices got softer and softer and softer. 3. So I turned in the other direction and still softer and softer and softer. Then it hit me maybe the voices were coming from up but there is no sky, no up just colors, colors, colors.This place that he was trapped in, I was stuck in . There was no up or down and everywhere I walked it looked like I was walking in circles, circles, circles. 3. I began to see what looked like fractions of images.Then, dead in my tracks, I stopped and I realized, In my perception I was going crazy and the because of my OCD. but really I was just normal, normal, normal and the world around me went crazy...the place was spinning, spinning, spinning. He was thinking of crazy. Like with the perception of the world, making realizations about things that I had never thought about

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